Lemons plz I'm dieing for one

It's supposed to be barely not barley as that is a type of crop. Srory I was just trying to help. But, good chapter anyways. You can review my chapters and point out the grammar mistakes and confusion sentences in mine.

I just came up with a one-shot. It's mainly about how the class rep fantasizes about dancing with Ruuka, but only to be shot down by the noble.