Hello,

Oh my god this is adorable. I'm really not mushy AT ALL! Bar baby animals purring/growling and 3-5 year old doing to super hysterical laugh that only youngin's do, pretty much nothing makes me awwwww. But this did it. Well done, especially as it's your first FF. Keep up the good work.

M. Scragz

I like the idea behind it. Its sweet and Shulesy which I love. A few commas are missing but besides that very good for your first fic. I hope to see some more of you on here.