There's such depth of emotion here - loss and pain, yet hope as well. I love your portraits of both Regina and Emma, and of Emma needing time away from Regina post-curse breaking to work things out for herself. So many great lines - this one, "it turns the air in Regina's lungs into shards of glass," was vivid and fit perfectly with Regina's history with smashing glass in pain and anger.

Oh no this is so heartbreaking sad that they have to be separated and I just love the concept of the story is wpnderfull update soon;-)

As always, you do Swan Queen, whether short or long story, with such depth and humour!

Nice start. Like to see where this goes.

Thanks for the fic :)

clever. :)

wonderful

I liked it

Love it; more?