Thanks for finishing the story:-). It was an enjoyable read.

That's not the end of the story is it? I'm enjoying it soooo much!

I like how you put Jo and Theo together:-). Hopefully, it stays that way. I do wish we got to "see" how they got together e.g. how Jo revealed her feelings. But very good read!

Hay! I'm so glad Theo and Jo are together. But poor Beth! I thought Frank liked her too. That part bites. But I'm still loving your story!

Excellent chapter. So glad Jo and Theo are together, even if it's only for now. As much as I love the original novel , Jo and Theo not getting together was the one point that I really disagreed on.
Keep writing, I'll keep reading and reviewing! :)

Ahh :) utterly brilliant. I love this urban take on the classic.

Oh, I like how Jo is acknowledging her burgeoning feelings for Theo. I certainly hope she acts on it:-). I'm surprised Theo is going to a military academy, as it so doesn't seem like him. kwim? Anyway, looking forward to the next update.

Oh no! Theo can't leave! How could this happen?! I love your story by the way.

Nice touch with the military school. But poor Jo! Just as she had surrendered to the hormone fairy, the object of her affections, and her best friend, get taken away all at once. Please update soon, I really love this story! :)

You've got a vivid imagination for the back story. That could be its own story line. That was so sweet of Theo to be so supportive of Jo. What does "Che gelida..." mean?

Dun dun duuuun! Excellent chapter! I love this fiction, and love your Jo. Actually, I love all of your characterisations.
If possible, could start playing around with the romantic tension between Jo and Theo? You did a few chapters back and I really enjoyed it! :)

Glad the story is veering back to the book story. I enjoyed this chapter and look forward to the next.

whoa, that last chapter was so not what I was expecting in a LW fanfic. I think it deserves a story of its own. Will there be more Theo action in the next chapter?

Lovely chapter filled with well written emotion.
Just a quick thing, not a criticism, but the plot is moving quite a long way away from the actual book plot. When are you going to go back to it? Personally, and I know it's ages away, but I just want to know how you handle theo proposing to Jo, or whatever version of that event you're going to use. :)
Update soon!

Good chapter