|Reviews for Critical Hour|
| KHJ 4/24/13 . chapter 20
I owe you a final review and a big THANK YOU for writing this great story (but an N.Y.C. trip just came in the way). I've really enjoyed being on this journey with you, Neal, Peter and everyone else - and you know what? I sent many thoughts your way during my vacation, because we walked by a place called Regal more than once ;-)
Loved it lots, and I wouldn't mind a sequel ;-)
Once again, thank you very much!
| mouse8 4/22/13 . chapter 20
A perfect end to a perfect story. I love being able to immerse myself in a long story and this delivered in spades. Your characterisation was always spot on and I could hear your dialogue coming from the characters' mouths. This is a story to save to read again very soon. Thank you!
| Guest 4/16/13 . chapter 20
Such an amazing story overall! You did a fantastic job with this, and I loved every moment of it! Truly an incredible work of art. So sad to see it end, but it was an awesome ride!
| Olimka 4/16/13 . chapter 20
I like so much this fic, you have 100 points. So congrats for a good job.
| Iceangel1229 4/15/13 . chapter 20
This was absolutely amazing! I've loved this story since the first paragraph and have loved every subsequent one. I really enjoyed the incorporation of my favorite song Sleeping Sickness. You captured the characters very well and I look forward to any stories you write in the future. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story. Until next time :)
| aleeban 4/14/13 . chapter 20
This story has definitely become a classic of White Collar fandom. I enjoyed it immensely! Thanks for this wonderful piece of work. Keep us readers happy by completing your other story soon as I already have high hopes for it :)
| Wondo 4/13/13 . chapter 20
Brilliant ending to one amazing story! I held off reading this until I had enough time to really savor it.
You certainly delivered what you promised ... and more. Please oh please, continue to write. I'm already anxious for your next submission. You are one talented lady. :)
The banter in this chapter sparkled. The serious issues Neal and Peter touched upon heartwarming.
I loved your line about Peter and Neal sometimes being frighteningly alike. That they are ... and so dissimilar at the same time. These two are the most entertaining and charming duos laded with beloved idiosyncrasies.
Thank you for Critical Hour!
| velveteen habit 4/12/13 . chapter 20
I don't really know how to review this last chapter that will fully articulate how much I loved this story. I think it really could have gone on forever, if only because you wrote this relationship so naturally. Yeah, it was "a story that took place in a couple of hours, in one room" but that only works this well if you can successfully make their relationship move the story as vividly as intricate plotting that spans time and place. And of course, you did that in spades. And any author who is looking to improve their N/P dialogue, look no further than your fic as Lesson 1-A. Marvelous work!
| govgal 4/11/13 . chapter 20
Human interactions and the sacrifices we make for true friends will always make great stories!
| Lovely Rain Dancer 4/11/13 . chapter 20
I just want to say that I'm incredibly glad that I stayed for all this story. It was a pleasure to read. Incredibly heart wracking, nerve fraying but so well written at the same time!
All the characters were perfect, and the conclusion was spot-on. So thanks :)
| Guest 4/11/13 . chapter 20
Hmm. Kind of disappointed that you didn't actually have Neil remember more of it and have them actually talk about it some. Sort of a cop out not to deal with it.
| S.A.N.e-but-inS.A.N.e 4/11/13 . chapter 20
I deam this a perfect ending to a story I never wanted to see end. I loved this story and chapter. They are all just wonderfully written and I can imagine many people envy your writing skills, including me. By reading your stories, I think I have learned a lot more to writing a well written, entertaining story that grips people. I can't help but always be on the edge of my seat, reading this story even if it is at 3:30 am (and trust me, that has happened on many occasions).
I look forward to reading more stories by you, hopefully in the near future.
So for now I would like to say congratulations on a job well done...
| anon 4/11/13 . chapter 20
omg its over :'(
i looooove this story. its just so well written on all accounts. the detail, the characterisation, the language, the mood, the deliciously lengthy...length. everything.
i would read any new piece you formed on white collar. PLEASE keep writing!
im already starting to miss your neal and peter :(
excellent job. really. be proud :D
| BlueDiamondStar 4/11/13 . chapter 20
Absolutely brilliant! I so enjoyed this chapter all the words simply dropped out of my brain by my melting heart.
The dialogue between Neal and Peter, and Neal and El. It was so amazing.
The display of their emotions was just heart-stoppingly splendid.
The absolutely great ending to this fantastic story I feel honored to have followed all this time.
Yes, seeing some continuation might seem a welcome idea, but right at this moment the story is perfect as it is.
Good luck with next one:)
| wotumba1 4/11/13 . chapter 20
"I am an expert on sooo many things, Peter" - ain't that true...
too bad the story is already over. loved it! a lot!