I love the beginning and I would love it if you would continue it

Now im not sure what has made you stop working on this story, but i for one would like to see where this story heads. Please write more chapters for this story.

I wonder what the summary has to do with the story... Nice writing style though

Its supposed to be big sister isn't she?

I like, I'm curious what direction you'll take the story. Keep it up.

this is a good start, I would love to see it finished