love the story and dont worry about that idiot I like how you do the flashbacks it kind of gives us a sidestory instead of leavin it as theyre just engaged really like the story keep updating

Love the chapter shelly but Annie seems to have lost the Irish accent a bit Haha anyhow love ya bitch xxxx mq

I just found your story and love it, well done and keep up the good work

Your tenses are stupid you keep switching from past tense to present tense, what sort of retard are you !

can't wait to see where Anne and Murphy go in this story. keep up the good work

LOVE your story please carry on :)

Please continue :)