Wow this was hilarious! Sloan is the best! :-)

Cute story! I love the Sloan interaction with them.

Well, there are a lot of people who worry that when Will and MAC are back together the show won't be that interesting any more.

Your story proves that THEY ARE WRONG! It can still be funny and hilarious!

I really hope Sorkin can adopt your ideas...put them back together and bring us fun like u did...

excellent story! Words fail me...

I re-read this quite a number of times and each time I can't stop laughing.

LOVE LOVE LOVE

Totally LOVED this... Great idea for a story...

Love how the staff hadn't noticed and Mac being annoyed they hadn't after a while! lol...

Loved the whole night getting drunk with Sloan and Will's reaction to them both...
LOVED this line - "She can pay me back in other ways. From you, I'll need cold, hard cash." - made me laugh - I can imagine him saying something like that!

awwww - at the kiss bit at the end there - "Do I have to have a reason?"/"Never" he replied. - sweet!

Great story matey - shame it says "complete" - would have loved to read more!

Thanks for posting...
x

This was wonderful. :) I love the idea of a fic centering about the private lives of Will and Mac and the rest of the newsroom. I especially love Mac's relationship with Sloan. I hope you're going to write some more? I'm intrigued to see where you go next with it. :) x

Your dialogue absolutely kills me in this one.

Especially: ["Loudly?"] That still makes me laugh.

And: ["I am not leaving you alone with Sloan. Did you know she would sleep with you in order to live here?" Mackenzie slurred indignantly.] I actually laughed out loud. I'm SO glad you added this.

Freaking amazing.

OMG OMG OMG...I feel that I really need to write this review before I go to sleep...

First of all, I wish to see this whole thing happen on the SHOW! SOOOOOO funny...your writing can always make me laugh out really LOUD...

OK, there are so many things that I really adore in this story...

[They were out there for any and all to see, and their co-workers were still none the wiser.]

AHA? I was surprised too. How come the entire staff are not able to uncover it. Maybe they pretend they don't know. *giggle*

[ I was in a bar near the Mekong River …"]

Haha i love this paragraph.
Reminds me of what he said in Episode 1.

[when my email account started sending me news alerts at 6am this morning I found out that my friend is in all the gossip pages today]

LOL! I must say this story makes me adore Sloan a little! (Well i think she is good basically. I'm just too much invested in Will and Mackenzie. now I think i begin to like Sloan more)

[The only time you want to get really hammered is when the Dow plunges more than 2% or when it involves Don. ]

oh MAC! she is always a keen observer! LOVE HER.

[She can pay me back in other ways. From you, I'll need cold, hard cash]

OMG Will! How can he be so star-spangled smart and humorous! LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE

[…it's too early for me to be picturing the ways in which Kenzie will be paying you back.]
[You need to be concerned with group dynamics and office morale]

Once again, Sloan is so cute!

[ Sometimes the best things in life are worth the wait. Trust me]

I'm so touched by this line. Really. Hope Jim and Sloan can figure things out eventually.

Fabulous job! I enjoyed it soooooooooo much!

"I knew it! You guys probably have sex like you argue."

"Loudly?" Mackenzie inquired.

Hahahahahahaha! Oh God that is one of my favourite lines from a fanfic EVER. EVER. I love getting unexpected stories from you...though I guess all new fics are unexpected since we don't have a collective diary or anything, but still, you know what I mean. So thank you so much for posting!

i love the ending! Yes, Mac - you just need to grab him and kiss him! But I do love how you've written their relationship - they're back together but they're as much best friends as lovers. Adore it! And I see what you mean about Sloan rants lol. But they work so well! I think they always bring out a different side of Mackenzie, which is always fun :)

Can't wait to see what you come out with next!