Very good.

Ayani gets a fitting farewell here. I am so glad that you wrote this fic. I believe that Ayani was a very important part of Taylor's life and would have also been a major influence in Wash's life.

That was very, very beautiful. You've left a wonderful image of Ayani in my head...not to mention a lovely image of Wash. Thanks you.

Awww Pure wash she is just so lonely without him! It was kind of sad but nevertheless wonderful! I would still love to know what taylor did during the 118 days...

Already told you over at lj but I really, really like this one, its showing a side of Wash we only saw so far in the pieces where Grace was already born, very emotional without being out of character.