Just read your story. Quietly moving. The way you "continued" the episode and including portions of previous episodes was wonderful. I really enjoy when writers expand on an episode, filling the blanks with possible scenerios. You did this beutifully with story. I hope to read more from you soon.

Will you be updating "The Parents Apple" soon? That's another story of yours that I am really into.

Thanks for sharing you talent with us.

I love it! I love that Danny visited her and that she had the beginnings of the rain walk. A really great exchange between them!