|Reviews for Blue Christmas|
| Guest 3/11/13 . chapter 1
| Guest 3/10/13 . chapter 1
| from a hopeless teen 2/2/13 . chapter 5
It's really great. So cool can't wait for chapter 6
| BlueJay026 2/2/13 . chapter 5
Awesome! Thank you for updating this! This story's so cool!
Oh no, Shaiden remembers everyone but Thorne! What are they gonna do now?
Keep on writing! I want to check out the next chapter!
| akl110998233 2/2/13 . chapter 5
Great chapter. A little out of the season but who cares. Update soon.
| akl110998233 12/16/12 . chapter 4
OMG the start is really sad. Glad Thorne survived
| BlueJay026 12/3/12 . chapter 4
WOO-HOO! THORNE'S ALIVE!
I loved this chapter! Please update this again soon! I wanna know what happens next!
May I offer a few suggestions? I think that what might help your stories a little bit would be if you seperated those huge paragraphs into smaller ones, and put those speaking parts on their own line.
God made you a very creative writer! Keep it up!
| lsgirl988 11/23/12 . chapter 3
this is what Ruby looks like by the way! imgres?um1&hlen&saN&tbod&biw1366&bih651&authuser0& tbmisch&tbnidg5In5GGQO0z_qM:& %3Fp%3D5740&docidyU0xbIrm_SOO5M& . &w584&h600&eiDI6vUOS9ONC30QHVuYC4Dw&zoom1&iacthc&v px1102&vpy192&dur63&hovh228&hovw221&tx188&ty168&si g112757627142035371054&page1&tbnh153&tbnw148&start 0&ndsp18&ved1t:429,r:17,s:0,i:138
| BlueJay026 11/20/12 . chapter 3
I liked Gildar's sacrificial moment in the Stockade there, very nice!
Update again soon!
| BlueJay026 11/19/12 . chapter 2
Ooh, cliffhanger! Is Thorne really dead? And who was that green guy? DESTROY HIM!
Update when you can! I wanna know what happens next!
| lsgirl988 11/19/12 . chapter 2
Now I know what you are thinking but I have more suprises up my sleave. Maybe a love interest for 2 defenders. Maybe a jealous Bird. Maybe more siblings. you never know!
| lsgirl988 11/19/12 . chapter 1
Aww thank You and yes I will be updating pretty regularly
| BlueJay026 11/19/12 . chapter 1
Awesome! I really liked Kook's last comment there. Are you gonna update this? Please?
I wonder why six of the original Defenders left? I'm warming up to the new ones, but I still miss the others.
By the way, you've gotten a lot better with your sentence structure. Great job! Keep it up!