Plz update

Please update

It's really great. So cool can't wait for chapter 6

Awesome! Thank you for updating this! This story's so cool!

Oh no, Shaiden remembers everyone but Thorne! What are they gonna do now?

Keep on writing! I want to check out the next chapter!

Great chapter. A little out of the season but who cares. Update soon.

OMG the start is really sad. Glad Thorne survived

WOO-HOO! THORNE'S ALIVE!

I loved this chapter! Please update this again soon! I wanna know what happens next!

May I offer a few suggestions? I think that what might help your stories a little bit would be if you seperated those huge paragraphs into smaller ones, and put those speaking parts on their own line.

God made you a very creative writer! Keep it up!

this is what Ruby looks like by the way! imgres?um1&hlen&saN&tbod&biw1366&bih651&authuser0& tbmisch&tbnidg5In5GGQO0z_qM:& %3Fp%3D5740&docidyU0xbIrm_SOO5M& . &w584&h600&eiDI6vUOS9ONC30QHVuYC4Dw&zoom1&iacthc&v px1102&vpy192&dur63&hovh228&hovw221&tx188&ty168&si g112757627142035371054&page1&tbnh153&tbnw148&start 0&ndsp18&ved1t:429,r:17,s:0,i:138

I liked Gildar's sacrificial moment in the Stockade there, very nice!

Update again soon!

Ooh, cliffhanger! Is Thorne really dead? And who was that green guy? DESTROY HIM!

Update when you can! I wanna know what happens next!

Now I know what you are thinking but I have more suprises up my sleave. Maybe a love interest for 2 defenders. Maybe a jealous Bird. Maybe more siblings. you never know!

Aww thank You and yes I will be updating pretty regularly

Awesome! I really liked Kook's last comment there. Are you gonna update this? Please?

I wonder why six of the original Defenders left? I'm warming up to the new ones, but I still miss the others.

By the way, you've gotten a lot better with your sentence structure. Great job! Keep it up!