great job MAC.

She should have done this 5 YEARS AGO

awwww - great to see another one from you... :)

Arrrggghhh - I don't like Brian - I don't know if I've ever mentioned this? (only about 1000 times on this site)... but I don't like Brian...

Anyway, well done Mackenzie - right thing to do!

Loved this line... "I've already made this mistake. I don't need to make it again. I already know how much I love you." and I love Will's reaction to this line - a smile and a kiss... awww - so glad to see the total trust there...

Great stuff & you can write decent endings! Any ending where Mac totally dumps brian is more than decent!

Thanks for posting...
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Oh shush! Your stories are fab and if your endings were terrible they wouldn't be so shh and be more confident ;) We all love them and want you to write more asap! :p

I adore the bit where she says "I don't need to make it again. I already know how much I love you." Haha Brian - scary thing is, I can actually see him doing this. I think Mackenzie would change, but I'm nowhere near as optimistic about Brian. Fingers crossed that one day Aaron will write us a lovely episode where Brian gets more of a sendoff from Will than The American Taliban.

Great job :D

So glad to see more from you so soon!

I LOVE that Mac told Will, but it kind of makes me nervous that she hid the fact she was going to see Brian.