|Reviews for The Forgotten Child|
| Pete the Rock 11/19/12 . chapter 1
So-so story. There is a Pokemon only section in the Games category, if you weren't aware. Plus, could you break up your paragraphs more? When you compact many people speaking, you confuse the readers a lot. Try reading one of my stories to understand what I mean.
| BeautifulOneShots 11/18/12 . chapter 1
This is one of the many soon to be ships called Dochel.