Hope you write se more soon. Can't wait for Nat's conversation with Todd.

Please finish this story.

Please finish the story already.

awesome update!

Loved this whole chapter of John moving heaven and earth to fight for his family, now this is the John McBain that I want to see and he is going to fight like hell not just for Natalie but for his son Liam and his unborn child that Natalie is pregnant with

But I loved John interacting with his best friend, Natalie's uncle, Bo by calling him and then Nora being mentioned and what not, but then going over Natalie's accident again was great

I really hope you update soon. This story is so good. I also really hope John gets his head out of his ass. LOL

More please. Definitely more.

Wow! so good.
I'm wondering if Sam and alexis were trying to keep John and natalie apart, hmm?
Can't wait to read more.
hope more updates are on the way.

Good chapter. Can't wait to find out what Natalie wants from Todd. Can't wait to find out what the heck is up with Clint.

I like this version of John so much better than GH's. Can't wait to see John fight for his family. I'm also really
curious to see what Natalie wants from Todd. Can't wait for the next chapter

I want to know what she's doing, too! lol! More please! Oh, and thank you for the update!

Loved it!

I hope Natalie knows what she's doing by turning to her Uncle Todd considering she hates her uncle and Todd hates his niece Natalie right in return, so I have to wonder just if Todd would even try to help her or the better question is why? Or I also have to wonder why Natalie would turn to Todd of all people to help her

Natalie doesn't want John to have Liam anywhere near Sam, I guess that is understandable

And I love how Natalie is settling into Port Charles making new friends in Port Charles too by interacting with Patrick, Dante, Lulu and her cousin Starr, but I wonder if she will interact with more characters too along the way in Port Charles

But by Mr. Black and Mr. Blue being arrested, I wonder if that will bring Natalie's father Clint over to Port Charles

Oh dude Nat's going to make a deal with Todd. This should be entertaining. :) Glad you're back. I was going through major Jolie withdrawal. *G*

Fantastic! So thrilled to see another update from you. I actually LOVE that Natalie is calling Todd. They've been at odds a lot over the years, but they also had this weirdly cool bantering relationship in spite of all the horrible things he did (and that goes for the relationship with both real-Todd and Todd/Victor).

Can't wait to see what the next update brings!

I'm so glad to see the update. I'm curious what Natalie wants Todd to do.