Good story! Made me smile :)

This is so wonderful! Your writing is clear, concise, and in character. I enjoyed the small dose of Colette's French accent you threw in there.
Could you perhaps continue it? If not, it stands beautifully as a one shot.
Thank you for writing for my favorite movie ever!

Good portrayal of Ego! He acts like Ebenezer Scrooge at the end of Christmas Carol in a way!

DELICIOUS.
Oh, absolutely delightful. Your Ego, drunk on delight! I could see this, picture them in the pre-dawn light! I love it! Thank you for writing it.
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