|Reviews for Price of Our Sins|
| leahjoker 5/24/13 . chapter 5
Woah I had to stop and leave a comment before I had even finished the chapter. I LOVE this story so far like I actually love it, but I HATE all the Arya bashing. My thoughts were that Sylvia and arya would have gotten along fine with sylvia appreciating arya's independent nature, but it seems like instead, where arya is concerned, she shares all the same opinions that I disliked in a young and naive sansa. Then again this is your story so you can make the characters however you like, but I was just very disappointed to see arya refereed to as a "little beast" by a character I thought would have a more mature and I guess different opinion on what it means to be a lady.
| TWD 5/21/13 . chapter 6
Great story update soon
| rikka21 5/18/13 . chapter 6
omg ... amazing so realistic and sweet at the same time i really REALLY hope you update soon and also really want to now where robb got that skills ;) (and maybe read more about them hehehhehe) i love the way robb and sylvia interact and the fact they truly care about each other it sort of reminds me of ned and cat which is better than how her parents treat each other ... wish for more cersei, jaime and TYRIon moments
| Lotusxdoll 5/16/13 . chapter 6
Oh, how deliciously naughty! Where did he learn to do that thing with his tongue lol
Her wedding dresses sounded amazingly beautiful, you know why? Cause you're that freken good at writing details! I envy your writing style! I like that little flashback Robert had of when she came to see him when she was three. Then the after wedding feast! Tyrion has always been one of my favorites and I'm so glad he is happy for Sylvia. I can't wait to see them interact... Jaime as well. Where is that little bugger hiding during the wedding and feast anyway?
Hurry, hurry, hurry and update!
| Lotusxdoll 5/16/13 . chapter 5
I feel so many emotions because you updated! So many good feels!
It was surprised by how Robert wasn't thrilled to see her. But I like how you gave such details that go with the anticipation of not seeing someone for so long... Just to be disappointed that they're not as happy as you are. Then Cersei! Ugh the way you make me feel about this woman! I don't want to understand the way she thinks cause she's evil. But damnit! You make me more understanding and sympathetic towards her conflicting feelings for her oldest.
I do feel bad for Sylvia though because she was just so excited. Poor thing, at least she gets to marry Robb.
On to the next part!
| WhatsGoingOn 5/15/13 . chapter 6
LOVED IT, THE BABIES ARE TOO CUTE (and sexy) TOGETHER!
| Guest 5/15/13 . chapter 6
Dude, Cersei's opinion of Sylvia never gets old. Each time I read her POV...it's just...wow! I was so mad at Cersei for putting her in that get-up, and mad at Sylvia for going along with it (although I totally get it cause of her disciplined nature), once I read about her freezing her ass off in the godswood on shaky legs. There were a lot of funny cracks about Joffrey in just about everyone's POV, but Tyrion's was my favorite "Tyrion had no doubt his niece was perfectly sane, or at least saner than Joffrey." It reminds me of when he calls him Aerys II in the books. I find it interesting when Cersei had to steel herself when telling Sylvia those harsh truths. I guess I'm just constantly forgetting how complex her feelings are for her daughter, and therefore, always surprised when Cersei shows that she cares. Speaking of Cersei and her being conflicted and in pain (over Sylvia), I'm really curious why Jaime just dipped - I'm guessing Cersei wasn't pleasant after the wedding feast. And speaking of being curious, I also wanna know where Robb got his sweet cunnilingual talents - Tyrion immediately comes to mind, of course, but it was more likely Theon and if it was, I bet that lesson was downright hilarious.
| Carlypso 5/15/13 . chapter 6
I love this story! :)
| MissMac 5/15/13 . chapter 6
You know what I didn't like? NO JAIME! But I see that you knew that I wouldn't like that. But I know that you would know. Knowing knowing knowing. Ahem. Anyways...
I truly love love love this story. It's just so sweet and wonderful and I'm cringing at certain things because I know what's coming. I like the "she would never betray me" idea that Cersei has. Haha! If she only knew!
Your writing is always so vivid and I can "see" everything just from reading it. I just love where this is going. This story has a special place in my heart, right next to Vows. *hinty hinty hint*
And also...both of us updated last night! Hazzah! We are truly a wonder-team of awesomeness!
Carry on, milady!
| Maddie Rose 5/15/13 . chapter 6
This was a very good chapter, I really liked how you had the interactions between Sylvia and both of her parents. Robert seemed a bit indifferent, but Cersei was very caring, although determined to make sure the wedding wasn't a wholly northern affair, by incorporating the southern style of dress that Sylvia wore. You did well in conveying the nervousness that both Robb and Sylvia felt on their wedding night, and the bedding was realistic. So far, I'm enjoying this :)
| Isis Feist 5/15/13 . chapter 6
If Renly likes her so much why doesn't he spend more time with her: HINT HINT! :)
| purple sky always 5/15/13 . chapter 6
I always thought that king Robert would be happier to see his daughter.
| ninaluvsathena 5/15/13 . chapter 6
They're finally married! I can't wait to see what happens next :)
| HermioneandMarcus 5/14/13 . chapter 6
excellent chapter update and i can not wait to read more soon please and thank you
| Slytherin Studios 5/14/13 . chapter 6
Amazing job, I can't wait for the next chapter.