OH MY GOD THIS IS SO ADORABLE I ALMOST DIED AT THE LAST LINE OMG IT'S SO CUTE!

OMG I love it! I love the way you have him need her and not just in a sexual way. Cupcake! I love the way you have her seeing who he is as a person and that she feels kind of seduced and courted at the same time. Cupcake! I like how he loses it, but controls himself for her. Cupcake! The old lady part was funny.

I love that Wash is till alive. I love most of all that Skye is able to quiet the rage and anger that he feels for his father. Beauty and the Beast.

I think this is my favorite story of all of your stories, and it was so very well written. I felt immersed in the story as if I were there. Well Done!

Wow. Cool story. :)

You did great with the prompt given. loved your story as usual :D You should so do more prompts in the future

I like is beautiful ;)

This was splendiferous, my dear! Just splendiferous.