Very cute. I really enjoyed reading it! Please feel free to write more like this.

PS. I am one of those Aussies caught up in the re-showing of Ballyk on Seven 2, hence my story. :)

What an absolutely brillant story. Sorry to see it end. You could have been on the Ballyk writing team. The funny one liners made me laugh. My favorite was the one about what kind of wine Jesus turned the water into. Assumpta's three uni friends were diverse and balanced. Loved Roisin- you should work her into another story line. You have brought us the snap, pow and sizzle of the Peter/Assumpta had a hot roaring fire going every time they touched each other. The one paragraph in this chapter I keep re-reading is "The force of a man marking his territory." What would Peter have said if Assumpta had not interrupted him with that it that he loved her, or to declare his strong urge to physically love her? What do my fellow reviewers think of this bit. I think he wanted to tell her he loved her, but that is verbally marking your territory not gave us a detailed view of Peter just being Peter the man without the collar getting in the way. And the man liked it, he enjoyed himself and he loved being with Assumpta in this manner. Once he took her hand and kissed her, there would be no going back. Go ahead and electrocute one of Eamon's sheep. This story would have taken the series up and down the hills of Ireland. Bravo.

Beautiful - so nicely written and I am so sad that I can't read more.
I hope inspiration strikes you again very soon. :-)

I'm sad it's over but that was great and beautifully written. Hope you write more!

I hope we'll see more like this from you. So nicely done!

This was really great! Nice dialogue, I felt like the events weren't too divorced from what could've happened. It was nice a short too, didn't drag on or become over-eventful. Please write another when you have time :)

Oh that was lovely! I'm only sorry it's ended... but it is perfectly formed so I mustn't complain. I hope you have plans for more stories and will share them with us soon.

I really enjoyed this story :)
It made me laugh, and it was also very sweet! I love the new characters you brought into it as well.
Thanks for writing!

Very sweet! Thanks for writing!

Wow! Seriously fab! Can't wait to read some more.

I joyfully opened your story when I saw you posted a new chapter. Your words were smoking and fanning the flames, made them blaze. Loved the dinner batter. What a kitchen scene. NEITHER ONE of them will get much sleep tonight. This is a TEN! More, More, More.

Woah!

Think that's it for now. Need to cool down. Fab!

Phew, that was pretty steamy. But seriously though, I love your characterisation - with both existing characters in the canon and new AU ones. Can't wait for the next installment

This installment was a treat well worth the wait. Our leads have exactly the right amount of self-control (which is to say, not QUITE enough). Such fun watching them make a mess. Keep It up!

Carry on, make it as long as you like! This reminds me of the moment in Bridget Jones when Bridget's friends come round and find Mark Darcy helping her out in the kitchen. She can hardly send him home now can she?