This was a really sweet story, but I'm a bit disappointed that there wad absolutely no mention of Suly and Michaela's life while the girls were at college. Only raising one child would leave lots of time for enthusiasm. ;)

Wow ... That for sure was a great night! Would like to learn about their "aftermath" and waking up as husband and wife too! What about a little sequel? Maybe a little something, - maybe until their first baby will be born?!

Thank you, that was a great story. Looking forward to your next story

You shared a lovely teenage-love with your readers! Bigs thanks for this! Only 2 more chapters? I don't think a can live with that prospect. You be willing to think about a sequel? Something about their early marriage? Hope you will give your readers this promise as a Christmas-present!

Wonderful chapter! They're very cute together... :)

Well, they are to begin their life together. Great times for the whole family. Only 2 weeks yet, to endure Elizabeth's organizations and fussing. Can't wait to read more of this!

You brought fulfillment in their teenage-love. Can't wait to read about reaction of their parents. And advices of M & S of course! What about Hannah? Will you give her a boyfriend too before it ends? Can't wait to read more of this!

Wow! Young love at it's best! Great chapter with romance and suspence! Can't wait to read more of this!

Thank you vor a great chapter again! So much love, family-life and fun for all of them. You wrote chapters ahead so to be able to post often! Thanks ! for your thoughtfulness. Can't wait to read more of this!

Home again, best place in all of the world! Your story extented from Teeny-stuff to M & S again. I like it. Can't wait to read more of this!

You create a teeny-lovestory of it's best. Will they only act at campus or at home too? Because I think it could be interesting to see a protecting father (Sully) in that play. Can't wait to read more of this!

You're a good writer, very descriptive. I can see the action as it unfolds. But...this doesn't seem like DQ. It seems like it would be more suited to one of the teen tv shows. There is nothing that resembles DQ in this. And this chapter, frankly, disturbed me. I've been reading each chapter and truly trying to enjoy it, but... This doesn't seem like the image of Katie. She 'needs a drink' etc. She's spending the week with her boyfriend and they'll be sharing a bed together. Hannah seemed like at least she had some decency, but Katie seems to be trying to corrupt her. I get it that it's modern and they are college students. But...why didn't you just write this as a 'real' novel with other character names and make money on it? It's good enough writing. Why call it DQ fanfiction? I don't mean this as insulting, but I'm just wondering why...

Great tale about their day, - can't wait to read about their night too!

Your tale about Teenies and their desires and feelings is so great! So authentic! Can't wait to read more of this!

I wish Katie could stay with Zach. This Patrick seems sooo boring to me. But, of cause, it's not my story to decide... I guess we'll enjoy it anyways.