You favo my story, right? Thanks for that.

I read your other storys and have to say they are really interisting and OC chars rocks :D

Hey there! Welcome to the FE section of FFn :D Is this the intro for the main body of your fic? I'm just askin since the breaking of the fourth wall and the script format seemed a little odd to me, but I guess it works if it's an introduction, hehe :) If not, though, keep in mind that you may want to show the connection of these characters to the games rather than just have them tell the reader, so to speak. Just a lil' advice, don't get discouraged :)