|Reviews for Seeing the Wolves|
| Queen of Jacks 11/29/12 . chapter 1
Ha, I never thought of the fact that Alice couldn't see werewolves and Nessie. Duh.
| sunandsurf 11/29/12 . chapter 1
A very good twist at the end. I didn't 'see' that coming. Ha ha. But I really liked your point about Alice beginning to 'see' Jacob because he was becoming family - that really rang true for me. And I enjoyed the simile of Alice putting it together like a film.
| just a girl 11/25/12 . chapter 1
nice. the movie could have been so much more logical if you'd written the screenplay :)
| Montara 11/22/12 . chapter 1
You are right, she can't See the wolves so the whole scene is not believable...:))) Thank you!
| bcrepn 11/21/12 . chapter 1
Honestly the wolves thing never ocured to me, though it should have.
| Angeldolphin01 11/20/12 . chapter 1
I like it.
| SatinCoveredSteel 11/19/12 . chapter 1
I like the way you think, Camilla! This occurred to me, as well! I mean, the idea that Alice could have seen the dead bodies on the battlefield and extrapolated from there. I like your take on this—very nice!
Oh well, it's not like the movies never changed things, is it? ;)
| muffinmom 11/19/12 . chapter 1
Loved the explanation, and yet it's still AU - wouldn't Aro have been able to read Alice's idea also? Not to mention he's also have read renesmee's escape plan.
Still a great story, thx for sharing!
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM 11/19/12 . chapter 1
I think you explained the oddity very well... I have to admit, it bugged me too!
| kagen-mo 11/19/12 . chapter 1
brilliant! thank you for sharing!
| Lostgirl 11/19/12 . chapter 1
Perfect, Camilla! Now it all makes sense! Thanks for writing- loved it!
| DICATAKADD 11/19/12 . chapter 1
Kicked ass woman!
I did wonder about that...
"I fooled Aro well, didn't I?"
| Sunshinemommy 11/19/12 . chapter 1
Yes, this makes perfect sense. Well done :)
| Twiolic 11/19/12 . chapter 1
Good explanation for that massive about-face from canon.
| Guest 11/19/12 . chapter 1