Ha, I never thought of the fact that Alice couldn't see werewolves and Nessie. Duh.

A very good twist at the end. I didn't 'see' that coming. Ha ha. But I really liked your point about Alice beginning to 'see' Jacob because he was becoming family - that really rang true for me. And I enjoyed the simile of Alice putting it together like a film.

Good job!

nice. the movie could have been so much more logical if you'd written the screenplay :)

You are right, she can't See the wolves so the whole scene is not believable...:))) Thank you!

good idea,
Honestly the wolves thing never ocured to me, though it should have.

I like it.

I like the way you think, Camilla! This occurred to me, as well! I mean, the idea that Alice could have seen the dead bodies on the battlefield and extrapolated from there. I like your take on this—very nice!

Oh well, it's not like the movies never changed things, is it? ;)

Loved the explanation, and yet it's still AU - wouldn't Aro have been able to read Alice's idea also? Not to mention he's also have read renesmee's escape plan.
Still a great story, thx for sharing!

I think you explained the oddity very well... I have to admit, it bugged me too!

brilliant! thank you for sharing!

Perfect, Camilla! Now it all makes sense! Thanks for writing- loved it!

Kicked ass woman!

I did wonder about that...

"I fooled Aro well, didn't I?"

Yes, this makes perfect sense. Well done :)

Good explanation for that massive about-face from canon.

Bravo