|Reviews for The Build Up|
| Katycat1970 11/21/12 . chapter 2
Ha - love this... :)
Am loving Will's thoughts in the elevator - "She's gorgeous..." GLad he noticed that!
Love Mac following on blindly behind and LOVE Charlie's reaction...!
Great stuff - can't wait for more and to see how Will responds to all this...
Thanks for posting...
| millie.zhang 11/21/12 . chapter 2
OMG I LOVE THIS
| may 11/20/12 . chapter 2
thank you for the update!
im loving this story so much (i wont say how many times i've checked to see if you updated)
charlie is my love, that guy is such a sneaky smurf & mac is just.. ugh i adore her always. I like that she just calmly stands at the door not giving a shit. ha!
| lilacmermaid33 11/20/12 . chapter 2
Great chapter! I can't wait to see what the news alert is. I love the idea that the BP spill wasn't the first time they had to work together like that, with her being thrown into things completely unprepared.
| SerialStoryLover 11/20/12 . chapter 2
Thank GOD someone updated. I was starting to run mad :P I've been sooooooo looking forward to this! Thank you for posting!
Gaaah Charlie, Will and Mac in the same room for the first time :D *fangasm*
Can't wait to see you develop Mac and Will's relationship. Looking at the timeline and trying to take a guess at what the news alert is...
More please, pretty please :)
| TheGreaterFool 11/19/12 . chapter 1
i like it cant wait for more
| Guest 11/19/12 . chapter 1
this made me laugh.. i love how bratty will can be (and mac just follows him even though he had a tantrum lol) this is really good and i hope you continue.. i want them to do a flash back on the show but meh? i guess we always have fanfiction.. It would just be nice to see will not so.. abrasive
| lilacmermaid33 11/19/12 . chapter 1
This is cute! I definitely want to see more. I like the idea of him being intrigued right away, but then NOT actually wanting her as his EP.
| Guest 11/19/12 . chapter 1
Love it, you should keep going... Good luck with your exam!
| iworkwithpens 11/19/12 . chapter 1
Definitely more! Lovely description of how "everything about her intrigues him from the moment he first lays eyes on her." So very Will!
Can't wait to see where it's going!
| Katycat1970 11/19/12 . chapter 1
If anyone wants more?! silly question! YES PLEASE! YES PLEASE! YES PLEASE! :)
Loved the bit about the legs... "He's definitely noticed the length of her legs, he is, after all, undeniably a leg man." - There's something I LOVE about Will being a leg man!
Very much looking forward to more soon matey...
Thanks for posting and hope the exam went well - fingers crossed for you... x
| SerialStoryLover 11/19/12 . chapter 1
"to see if anyone wants more"? What kind of ridiculous question is that? YEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSS :D as soon as is physically possible please! :p
| millie.zhang 11/19/12 . chapter 1
YES YES MORE PLEASE!