|Reviews for The Long Road|
| IrishBug74 1/5/13 . chapter 7
Another great chapter!
| VBobier 1/1/13 . chapter 7
The explains the Moggies, thanks, cat like yet not cats, definitely alien.
| werewulf45 1/1/13 . chapter 7
This was very different but very interesting. I can't wait to see where this leads.
| Guest 12/21/12 . chapter 6
Another great addition to your story. I can't wait to see what happens next.
| Aussie 12/22/12 . chapter 6
Good chapter. However one thing I had trouble believing was that
Of the first questions the colonials would ask would be "when are you going to take back our homes for us". I would think that the specific scenario would be very low on the list of reasonable expectations for the colonials - especially when u consider that, according to what the colonials know, they're asking one colony to liberate twelve. Just on that presumption alone you would expect the colonials to presume that having the 13th tribe liberate the colonies would be impossible.
Apart from that, love the story so far
| IrishBug74 12/22/12 . chapter 6
| VBobier 12/21/12 . chapter 6
Yeah skirts might not be appropriate in zero gravity, trousers would do. Good story, I'll be here ready to read more.
| David Falkayn 12/15/12 . chapter 5
I'm curious to see how Britain maintained its status as a dominant power in your timeline, but there are alternate courses and directions that could have been taken anytime up to 1914 that could have shifted the course of events and there was no guarantee that the US would have risen to or wanted to rise to world power status prior to 1898-plenty of room to play around in.
The chip is a good way to deal with the language barrier and I liked the appearance of factions within the human cylon ranks.
Nice shout out to the Ark Royal-hopefully this Ark Royal doesn't share the fate of its WW2 namesake.
| Guest 12/12/12 . chapter 5
Great addition to your story. I definitely can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great writing.
| VBobier 12/13/12 . chapter 5
Very good story here, I'll be waiting to read some more.
| IrishBug74 12/13/12 . chapter 5
Another great chapter, I am excited to see If the Colonials settle Earth or a place of their own!
| thunder18 12/12/12 . chapter 5
Great chapter Update soon
| IrishBug74 12/9/12 . chapter 4
Great story. I look forward to read more...
| Guest 12/4/12 . chapter 4
Another awesome addition to your story. Love where this is going. I can't wait to see what happens next.
| David Falkayn 12/6/12 . chapter 4
The chip is a good quick way to break the language barrier and it also reveals that the Earthers are a bit more open to cybernetics at this time than the Colonials-of course it's likely that Earth never had an AI revolt to contend with either. But it definitely does have an enemy. Interestingly, while British English might be drifting somewhat towards American idioms, the opposite is occurring here-we'll probably end up meeting somewhere in the middle as time goes on.