Oh, poor Adam!

I love the contrast between Gail and her Voice. Clearly, the Voice has taken control, as Gail likes the strength that it gives her, and so she flushes her meds. I also love the way you keep pointing out little details like hair colour - subtle clues. Gail's planning is sinister, and the idea that she has been in Adam's bed without him knowing is very disturbing.

Great chapter. Keep it up!

A female serial killer makes a great change, and Violet is such a creepy one. The section where she feeds him makes me shudder! Nice Flack humour in this chapter, and great description of the moment when she begins to home in on Adam. Poor fellow!

Hooray! You've posted it! Good luck. I think that this is a great start, and Violet comes across as a really creepy and dangerous woman.