| Reviews for Pineapple Upside Down Cake, Narcissistic Detectives, and Fake Psychics |
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SleepingMelodies 5/12/13 . chapter 1Yes you should write another chapter! I don't know about that last questions...I now have the urge to go see what that tastes like! |
ShirokuroNoKitsune 1/6/13 . chapter 1I loved the story, but you need to start a new paragraph every time someone new speaks. Just saying. |
Ava-Potter gal 11/27/12 . chapter 1Yes, update. Just so you know, you're supposed to start a new paragraph when there's dialogue, and each time a different person speaks. Just a tip! |
torchil 11/24/12 . chapter 1I would like a new chapter. :) |
fantomfaire 11/19/12 . chapter 1This has promise...can't wait to read more! Please update again soon! |
JesusCaesar 11/19/12 . chapter 1Yes there should be another chapter, because there is a lot of things this story could turn into. :P I guess bananas and peanut butter are okay, I don't really like bananas so I am pretty much biased from the start. |