|Reviews for Pineapple Upside Down Cake, Narcissistic Detectives, and Fake Psychics|
| SleepingMelodies 5/12/13 . chapter 1
Yes you should write another chapter! I don't know about that last questions...I now have the urge to go see what that tastes like!
| ShirokuroNoKitsune 1/6/13 . chapter 1
I loved the story, but you need to start a new paragraph every time someone new speaks. Just saying.
| Ava-Potter gal 11/27/12 . chapter 1
Yes, update. Just so you know, you're supposed to start a new paragraph when there's dialogue, and each time a different person speaks. Just a tip!
| torchil 11/24/12 . chapter 1
I would like a new chapter. :)
| fantomfaire 11/19/12 . chapter 1
This has promise...can't wait to read more! Please update again soon!
| JesusCaesar 11/19/12 . chapter 1
Yes there should be another chapter, because there is a lot of things this story could turn into. :P I guess bananas and peanut butter are okay, I don't really like bananas so I am pretty much biased from the start.