i vote Midnight

WD30, If you would like I could probably proof-read this story for you if you would like. Then I could fix the spelling and grammar errors. PM if you would like me to proof-read this for you.

I really think this could be a successful and complete fanfiction. PM me if you need help with grammar!

This story is good, except for the spelling mistakes and missing capitalization. For example: Panting hard, she said, "Oh no! My hair is on fire!" Update soon!

Sorry that I'm too lazy to sign in. I read all three chapters of this story today and I've noticed quite a few spelling and grammatical errors. It's a shame because it doesn't seem to be a bad story and I was wondering if you'd be interested in letting me beta for this story.
Send me a pm (same penname) if you're interested and we'll talk.
. Susie .
Not all that glitters is gold; not all who wander are lost.

Please update soon! Your doing really good so far, there are just a few grammar errors but nothing major. Your doing really good with this story keep up the good work:):):)

Great chapter

Stars gone Update

I vote Moonlight.

Good chapter can't wait for more

This is a great story update soon and I think stars night fury should be named midnight because midnight and star go together better than the other options

The windows are called shutterslolz. Don't worry everyone forgets something sometime if anither

This is a decent story beginning. Please continue this. My vote: B, no doubt.

First chapter great ... hope u update... :)