|Reviews for a star in the night|
| S 5/16/13 . chapter 1
i vote Midnight
| NightFuryOne 1/21/13 . chapter 2
WD30, If you would like I could probably proof-read this story for you if you would like. Then I could fix the spelling and grammar errors. PM if you would like me to proof-read this for you.
| Lady Cocoa 12/30/12 . chapter 1
I really think this could be a successful and complete fanfiction. PM me if you need help with grammar!
| Lady Cocoa 12/29/12 . chapter 3
This story is good, except for the spelling mistakes and missing capitalization. For example: Panting hard, she said, "Oh no! My hair is on fire!" Update soon!
| Susie-Draegalia 12/26/12 . chapter 3
Sorry that I'm too lazy to sign in. I read all three chapters of this story today and I've noticed quite a few spelling and grammatical errors. It's a shame because it doesn't seem to be a bad story and I was wondering if you'd be interested in letting me beta for this story.
Send me a pm (same penname) if you're interested and we'll talk.
. Susie .
Not all that glitters is gold; not all who wander are lost.
| DoveMusic 12/27/12 . chapter 3
Please update soon! Your doing really good so far, there are just a few grammar errors but nothing major. Your doing really good with this story keep up the good work:):):)
| ethan.lukkar 12/25/12 . chapter 3
| popie92 12/10/12 . chapter 2
Stars gone Update
| Saphirabrightscale 12/10/12 . chapter 1
I vote Moonlight.
| ethan.lukkar 12/9/12 . chapter 2
Good chapter can't wait for more
| ethan.lukkar 11/30/12 . chapter 1
This is a great story update soon and I think stars night fury should be named midnight because midnight and star go together better than the other options
| sara 11/22/12 . chapter 1
The windows are called shutterslolz. Don't worry everyone forgets something sometime if anither
| Xenomorpher 11/21/12 . chapter 1
This is a decent story beginning. Please continue this. My vote: B, no doubt.
| Alpha and omega23 11/20/12 . chapter 1
First chapter great ... hope u update... :)