I can be patient

I shall be patient.

this is good so far and i cant wait to read more... its kind of got me thinking about a Princess Tutu story. :-)

I hope you'll continue with this wonderful love story between Fakir and Ahiru! I am VERY looking forward to reading the rest of the fan-fic! I'm sorry, but I have to beg… HURRY THE HECK UP WITH THE REST OF THE STORY! YOU BETTER NOT BE KEEPING ME ON PINES & NEEDLES! Thanks for listening to my plead (I know that wasn't really a plead… more like a demand… hehehehe)!

Man-points?...
I cant wait for more! WOOHOO!

I DON'T LIKE TRAGEDY! NOOOO! I can't wait for more! So dark!

Good two chapters Yanna Blake.

I'm wondering why Ahiru's turned into a raven in Fakir's dream, and why he believes he's broken his promise. Foreshadowing, perhaps? Only time will tell.
On a side note, you can't lose what you never had! So funny :D If Ahiru actually manages to use Fakir's sword to save him, now that'll be something special.

The fact that the first chapter was actually a dream sequence...was COMPLETELY surprising to me. Drosselmeyer sounds so evil! But I'm glad Ahiru's alive and not a crow :)

It's a little depressing isn't it?

Quite perfect. Quite excellent

This is a good story. Please continue. Ahiru and Fakir forever.

Interesting concept. Ahiru, the once ballerina-princess, shatters her heart, just as Mytho shattered his own so long ago. Maybe the start of another story? Or maybe she'll just die...I hope not.
Anyway, this story has potential. Good luck with your first fanfic story and keep writing!