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Love that final line! Definitely a great way to end the love triangle! Good line from Adze about winning the round, her vampire cunning is still here, they make a really cute couple! Great story - definitely something different from the usual love triangles! xo

Oooh moment of realisation there for Erin. I like this moment between Vlad and Erin - it's great to have Vlad recognising that he was being a prat to everyone concerned... although 'Even Bertrand' - come on Vladders! And Erin is being decent here too with the recognition that Vlad wasn't in a particularly great position himself.
Ah Bertrand, the master of manipulation and cunning- nicely played indeed!
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Great twist with Adze thinking that Erin's friendship was all an act (could genuinely believe Erin would be that sneaky). Loved the slight awkwardness of this conversation, the way Erin has to convince her that her friendship is real and the possibility that there could be more between them. Really lovely development of their relationship. xo

Awww Erin has some serious thinking to do. Poor Adze, the way Ramanga talks to her and being forced into a marriage with someone she doesn't like. And the awkwardness of having her sexuality become a topic of public discussion. I really like how Erin's thoughts and feelings have changed towards her.
Nice comedic touch with Vlad's comment about Bertrand- hehe! xo

Love the way you are developing Erin and Adze's friendship here - it reads as very believable. For some reason I really liked the description of Adze's coffin - its sounds very sumptuous, somehow very her!
And Vlad can totally be a pigheaded chauvinistic idiot sometimes, I'm liking how you explore that in this story.

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I really do like this fic; I think it's an interesting way of developing something between Erin and Adze that isn't necessarily antagonistic. Let's face it, Vlad's not exactly a prize, well, no one is technically, but its nicer that they came to this ... compromise on their own terms. So yes. Approved. Well done. Kudos.

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Definitely approving of this much nicer and more feminist Erin! So true about Vlad's situation, how he could just say no instead of treating Adze like this. Definitely on the extreme side to suggest staking or kidnapping her *disapproving look at Vlad*.
Really realistic protrayal of how an argument can rapidly get out of hand.
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Love this chapter, it's so lovely how the two girls become friendly and I really like how you develop Adze's personality in this, she comes across as a rather nice person actually underneath the whole princess act and certainly that line about Vlad treating her like an object is food for thought. Nice to see a fic which doesn't idealise Vlad and recognises he can such a prat at times.
The exchange between Adze and Erin about princesses, knights and dragons was excellent - the sort of abstract discussion that I can imagine having with my friends! xo

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I love that description of Adze ' a flurry of silk' - it's just so superbly her.

You get a a real sense of how Erin and Vlad's relationship is creaking under the strain of recent events. Would be nice in the real show if Erin did team up with Adze and was nice to her instead of being sulky and competitive. Nice to see Erin making an effort for her team here!

Great to see this up on FFN : )

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Really good

Really good xx