Well, I'm definitely having fun with this, and I'd very much like to see where it is going, so I hope you'll keep the updates coming! Now that the gang's all here, I have a feeling things are going to get really interesting... ;-). I like the way you have put the guys and girls into totally different roles and still manage to keep them in character.

No, definitely not horrible! In fact, it's rather cute and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it!