This is a really good story and I enjoyed reading it! :D

If you want to read a good story, you should check out Bringer of Death. It is a Dragon Ball Z fanfic that I think you would like!

Nice update, I liked the ending the interaction between the characters was very well done. I will say that I think this chapter would have been improved with more detail to the scenery, expressions/tone of the characters. The dialogue itself is fantastic, altered form canon but still having the same flavor, but there's very little surrounding detail which can take away from the immersiveness. Everyone is nicely in character as well and I really look forward to seeing what changes come in later, with so many characters genderbent I can see some really creative changes in story & characters coming about in the future.

Great chapter.

I like this story, it's done a good job and the writing is quite solid, I think it jumps around a little bit (though so did the manga) and some extent detail would be nice, but overall my only real problem is how closely most things are following the shows canon, there are differences, already though, so maybe they will become more prevalent later on?
Please don't see this as rude, or discouraging, I really like this story and the idea behind it, Bloomers and Goku sister thing this chapter was very sweet and I like that they seem a bit closer here. Everyone we see is believably in character and they work very well off each other.

Awesome New Chapter! :D :D
I finally got the first collection of Dragonball! :D :) :3 I'm so happy! :D
Goku transforming into a giant ape was awesome-both in the anime, and in your story! :3

Great chapter.

Awesome story! This is one of the most interesting stories that I have ever read! :)

The trio were pretty funny in the dragon ball series, since they were adults that were like children.

Bloomer wishing for any random girl to be his girlfriend is stupid. 'coz it could end up being the type of girl he was trying to avoid. Yamcha's wish is better, since her shyness is preventing her from getting a boyfriend. Even though we all know(Hopefully all of us do ') that they are not really going to get their wish that they have been hoping for.

Awesome New Chapter! :D
I was so close to buying Dragon Ball the other day...! T-T But I shan't give up! Dragon Ball will be MINE! D

Great chapter.

Great chapter.

Awesome FanFic! :D :D
Goku's funny as a girl! Especially when she keeps embarrasing Bloomer (I love his name-I laugh every time I read it!). :D
Chikashi's funny as well whenever he's around Goku-I can't wait to see what you have planned for when Goku and Chi are teens, especially when they meet again at the World Martial Arts Tournament!
What are Krillin and Tien gonna look like as girls? Or are you going to keep them as boys? It'd be funny if Tien was a boy for this fic, especially when Goku dacks him in the World Tournament! (Or did Goku rip Tien's pants? I can't remember which it was...)
Anyway, please update soon! :3

they fell for the trap anyways

Great chapter.