|Reviews for The Shadow in Exile|
| Apocalyptian Scribe 4/16/13 . chapter 8
I like this
continue this story and I will read
| TomZ1 3/31/13 . chapter 7
Good Story I really liked it I kind of like the couple so keep the good work ill be waiting for the next chap
| B.M.B.T 3/29/13 . chapter 7
I dont know what it is about this story, but god damnit i love it xD great story you got here, and i certainly hope to read more.
Keep up the good work :D
| darkened senses 3/18/13 . chapter 7
First off, wonderful story! I've been waiting for another chapter for awhile now and it's finally here. Your spelling is a little of, but it's not unreadable. Can't wait to see how the league match will unfold and if Talon will win or not! XD As for pairings, (not sure if you figured out who will be together, but I thought I'd put in my thoughts anyway) would be Talon and Riven if you're ever going to make a relationship. I just feel that if you put Talon with someone else then Riven will be on her own and it will feel as if we are reading two separate stories in one. You don't have to listen to me, but it's just what I think. Again, wonderful story and I'm looking forward to another chapter!
| Guest 3/17/13 . chapter 2
| Guest 3/17/13 . chapter 1
Aww :'D Sooo sweet. I like how you portrayed the deadly, ruthless champions as sweet little children. I can't stop smiling :')
| lugeba 3/17/13 . chapter 7
good story :), i prefer a talon x lux pair .
| Guest 2/1/13 . chapter 1
I love the story so far i can't wait for the next one .
| ChangarangBass 1/3/13 . chapter 6
I really like your story so far, love the family bond between Talon, Kat, and Cass. That being said I will vote for Talon and Riven, just for the fact that I think the four of them could be a happy family. Kat and Talon is also a good pairing though, so either way I won't be disappointed. Update soon!
| Blade 1/2/13 . chapter 5
Talon and Riven!
| SirDerp 12/30/12 . chapter 5
Nice story :D lots and lots a details which is nice.. As for pairingggss... Idk lol :P what are the selections anyways?
Anyywhooo keep up the awesome work
| Mr. Butler 12/22/12 . chapter 5
Well, I thank you all for your comments.
I don't really think Morgana is an Exile per say, in her Lore is sounds more so she is simply torn apart from her family due to political and ideology of how to rule. Kayle and Morgana taking a stand on either side. But what I will correlate between Riven and Morgana is there somewhat aloofness to those around them. Albiet Riven is more concerned with the state of Noxus is in, and at the same time Morgana feels the same way with her own homeworld finding that subdueing her sister will finally bring some sort of accomplishment. They'll have their conversation in the future, that you can have no worries.
Now for the pairings, I'll develop my story more and give more interactions with the Characters before making a definite pair, or if this story goes long enough have two pairings due to some break up or something along those lines. Now time to calm down before my annoyances in IRL get me to feel "Stabby" as well. ;)
| NameRussianHunt 12/20/12 . chapter 5
Well idk if my vote is too late but... Riven and Talon.
It's more unique and plus they are your main characters and so could be developed quite a bit more.
But I feel...stabby! HAHAHAHA! I lol'd :P
| Guest 12/16/12 . chapter 5
i vote talon to be with riven :D
| Jameson 12/15/12 . chapter 5
Indeed Kata x Talon is good pair ,in my opinion the best.