Beautiful.

my first the great gatsby fic to read! I read and imagined it to the tinniest detail of every word. I liked it. But I still hate Daisy, but also not as much as I should. Just half of it, i guess. so I should maybe settle for the word 'dislike'. Because I think, Gatsby can't hate her in even for the least possible reason. Maybe it's who Daisy is, or was, from the past that complicates everything. And it makes me wonder whether Gatsby even had her in the first place... because right across the end.. urgh! I reallyh don't like her. but I like this. soooo thanks...

This is beautiful. It sums up Gatsby and Daisy in such a mystically lovely way.

This is beautiful - I love how Gatsby ends up, as usual, grasping at nothing. Very well done.