I think the last sentence does sum up Rachel's feelings towards Tobias.. the fact that she keeps comparing her relationship with him to that of a 'normal' one, but at the same time, she knows it's the only thing that really keeps her together. Keep going in your writing! (: some SPG errors, but can be easily cleared up with the help of a beta.. would encourage you to find one so it makes for much smoother reading (:

Can you write a sequel to what happens at
Midnight please ? People this is a good man
Keep it up

I didn't think this was particularly well-written. Having all the "paragraphs" be one sentence long made it an awkward flow, it's not clear why you're explaining some details to the readers and not others. I did appreciate the good spelling, however.

Very Romantic but sweet and sad.
I liked the connection you had between the two characters. Nice work!

Cute. Incredibly cute! And simply, but exceptionally well written. I could sense the ease and comforting aspects of Rachel and Tobias' relationship. Very moving. Nice job M!