Very good. The detail was nice, as was the introduction of Harvey. It feels like something that would have happened in the real game. I do think they should have had some time to talk in the church, which was a nice safe haven to through in. The whole situation worked out nicely. Adding the part about manuscripts sort of made sense, and the part about not remembering was a nice addition, but somehow it came across as odd, he was too focused on the pages at the moment.

Very good. I liked it. His introduction was a bit bland, since it basically followed the guidelines of the first game, but at the same time it sounded appropriate. I like how he found the revolver and flashlight, with the remark of not being surprised. They do show up out of nowhere a lot, don't they. The taken introduction was a bit sudden, and it confuses me a bit, because I thought there were lights everywhere. And where exactly is he going? There is some intro to the setting but not much, and it is a little confusing. Overall: 7 out of 10. Maybe 8. Great job!

It's good so far! Harvey was a surprise. lol For some reason, I expected Alan's savior to be a different version of Barry. Harvey's a good companion type of person, like Carver in Dead Space 3. So far, it's awesome! I can't wait for another Entry.

I enjoyed this story so far. I like your writing style!

Okay, this is really cool but I did have some gripes with it, the setting the scene, or Alan's monologue was one of the game's main flaws. Alan is meant to be narrating like a book, but if Alan is running around the forest gibbering to himself I lose immersion. So you could work that out somehow, yes it's unfaithful to the Alan Wake name, but if it's a flaw, why would you keep it out of tradition.
The last paragraph needed to be split in two, walls of text are reproaching to read, and bore which is a shame because after rereading it, it was superb. But also in the last paragraph, 'Taken' was repeated just a tiny bit too often.

Awsome! Please Next Episoded!