Ouch! Poor Jeremy! Sounds like he had a rough day.

Stream-of-consciousness review:

Oh, he's gonna monologue!

George is mixing drinks? I ain't drinkin' anything mixed by George!

That's telling him, Thorton!

Ah, Artie - just can't keep his smart mouth shut! (Yay!)

"Didn't anyone ever tell you to kill first and talk later?" Loveless smiled. - since when does Loveless ever take that advice?

And Loveless gets away, as usual!

I had fun reading this story.

They need a Lojack for the train in case it gets stolen next time.

The mirrored hall sounds like something out of the palace at Versailles - which fits, since Antoine is French.

As for Antoine himself, I like him not at all. And I even feel sorry for Loveless.

I'm glad David developed a conscience, but now I wonder who the other person was - and whether I missed something (or forgot it).

Looking forward to more!

Wow, I'm actually feeling sorry for Dr Loveless!

LOL Jim and Artie stole their own train!

Loveless stole the train - again! :-O

I wonder what Richmond is thinking of at the end there!

Looking forward to the next installment. :-)

"James my boy, if I live to be a hundred I will never try that again."
You have some wonderful humor in your story. I love Loveless and Artie together.

Jim was being a stinker.

Glad the two are back together:)

Artie's getting screechy again.

It's getting very interesting here! What a pair- loveless and - Gordon . Of course I use them myself.

? They couldn't find their way out of a dark room with a lantern in their hand."
Great line!

Well you do have me very curious about what good doctor Thornton has been up to.
And we 've got some nasty nasty bad guys here. Ouch!

Your story is coming along nicely. I like having Grant in there. What a fun addition he I' m curious where you are going with this. thanks for writing