|Reviews for What If?|
| shadowgrl97 4/21/13 . chapter 4
I like it:)
| shadowgrl97 4/9/13 . chapter 3
You have some minor capitalization errors, but other than that its very well written. The wording is pretty good.
| xMysteryWriterx 4/9/13 . chapter 3
when will u be doing more cos i loved it!
| Cuteskull 4/9/13 . chapter 3
great story plz update soon
| butterflyflown 4/9/13 . chapter 3
Interesting...I think it needs more time on it though :)
| Ella 2/5/13 . chapter 2
Wright quick your starting on a great book
| shadowgrl97 11/26/12 . chapter 2
Hey this was good! Carly's a straight up *bleep* though, not that I like her much anyways. Sam's better! Anyways continue my gifted friend.
| Cuteskull 11/21/12 . chapter 1
good so far update soon
| Guest 11/20/12 . chapter 1
Yu hertny extronigns nigeria.
| shadowgrl97 11/20/12 . chapter 1
Dude it had a few errors here and there nothin major. But I thought it was really good!:) please continue!