Hmm... Interesting.

"Harmattan"? Where did you get that idea? "Manhattan"?

Poor Verstello (sorry if typo). Will he regain his ability to 'hear' his vivosaurs?

Hmm... What else? AH! I didn't notice it at first, but now that you mention it... He DID moved his hand & his head around a LOT... Makes sense.

I didn't notice the affinity to each elements. Never actually thought of it that way. I like it. A pity for that T-Rex, though.

I just kind of get confused everytime Verstello used signs. By the way, did he use letter-by-letter signs?

Makes pretty good sense that he already had someone to teach him if he was so good (in the game. Or not)...

Long comment short, makes good sense, nice logic (or whatever it is).

P.S.
Sorry I didn't review every chapter from the beginning.

P.P.S.
This story kinds of inspire me. And yeah, with a little bit of confirmation, I think I need to write again. Sorry for not telling you sooner.

I give up! I can't find out what was the pairing in Dark Horse Gambit althought I enjoyed the re-reading.
Cool chapter. The weakest known Vivosaur as a mascot? At least, he have one hell of an ability ( Mine changed between Penta, the raptor like bird and a Allo) Still epic!

I hope you are having as much fun writing it as I am having reading it!
Please update as soon as possible!

I wonder what new friends Vestello will make next chapter? Good work, I believe Vestello starting to piece together the puzzle that is Joe's comportement and the mystery of Caliesto Island past. Will Creed make an appearence?

Like the way the chieftan finds out about the mask.
I always just figured it was an inventory check.

That was cool. I'm still reading Dark Horse Gambit so I don't know the pairing you talked of before yet. The battle was kind of epic and speakjing of unused vivosaur, you still haven't used Dynamo. Finally, are you going to make Vestello re-able to hear his Vivosaur only after he allies with Don Boneyard AKA Joe's skull? I miss the voice in his head... wait, that came out wrong.

...I can only discribe this in one word: Interesting. A lot went on in this chapter, and it is hard to explain what I liked and disliked. Overall, it is very, VERY interesting. I am sorry I cant give anything more than this.

I like the way Vestello explained how Christ COULD save the Dinaurians if they are willing to receive it. My ? Is: do you think they ARE willing to do so?

Good chapter again. Love is in the air isn't it? Good thinking with the Miracle Fossil, heaps of trash can hide treasure. I should know, I work in a scrapyard and I once found 13 DS gamecards in a car. Talk about lucky!

Revived a T-rex was funny. I also liked the comment of the shoe-eating. Not a smart idea...
Poor Todd. Its not very fun when youre sick...

That was cool. I hope Vestello regain his ability to hear his Vivosaur soon. It must be terrifying not to ba able to have a two way communication with them. Was it me, or was Tyranno scared of Vestello's game face? I also wonder if he'll dig out a Chelon in Bonehemoth. Finally, what are the big Five? I know that Mapo becomes King Mapo, T-rex becomes T-rex Emperor and Allo becomes Giga Allo, but who are the other two?

Vestello revived some cool Vivosaur. I didn't even know Elasmo could be Super Evolved. It makes me want to find the head even more... and the Futabi's one so I can have a Samurai team. You gave them some good name too, the Kishin reminds me of a Gyarados in temper. Now, it should be the stealing of the super electrominite followed by fighting Lola before being eaten alive by Bonehemoth. Speaking of Bonehemoth, do you know how to return to the underwaters cavern? I can't seems to find the way.

A T-Rex is hard to handle. Dynal found that out when he had Dunal as a child.
I couldnt say things like THAT to Ruperts dad... That T-Rex is one troublesome dino...

Wow, Vestello really doesn't like Rupert's father, does he? I look forward to seeing Creed's response to that! XD And he has a T-Rex? Oh noes! How will the first encounter play out?

Wow. Vestello has to watch that language. I was mad enough to do that, too when I saw how CEO treated Rupert. I had controlled myself enough, though...
Todd, now would NOT be the best time to talk to your friend...