please update. :(

OF COURSE WE HATE U,jajajajaj no i dont hate u but this is going to sucks!, i was loving them together,if u kill naomi is going to be so hard on little emily, i hope u keep writing this, im still reading it anyway

...and the plot thickens.

When Effy said these lines:
"Wow. That's beautiful, just be careful Nai, and you exactly know what I meant".
I had a weird feeling about it's gist. And I guess my weirdness is right all along. And don't worry I don't hate you but i will if you wouldn't make the foreseeable angst worth it ;)

I really like how the story develops because its so random. keep it up mate, until then,

Dun Dun Duuun plot twist xD

i hated Emily a bit for not trusting Naomi and for thinking she's cheating on Emily.

It was so funny when Emily walked inside the hotel room and katie and effy were making out and she acted like she didnt startled anyone. it was also nice to have Cassie on the story. :)

omg i just fell i love with the song you used! great chapter too, i find it adorable when Emily got jealous with Cassie. :)

It could use quotation marks and italicization to differentiate the dialogues from the narratives, but overall it's quite interesting. I'm in love with documentaries so I just had to read this when I saw the summary :) Thanks.

This so cute! :3

This chapter was too beautiful for words, well done can't wait to read more :)

Glad you're back! I enjoyed this chap! can't wait for the next one.

Congrats on the 2nd month of your fanfic!
I love how you wrote Cook's POV and I love how protective he is with Emily.
Also, I'm intrigue with this April, cant wait for you next update. :)

I love this chapter! So playful and sexy great! :D cant wait for more!

Hoorah for Katie!

love the latest chapter, job well done!