PLZ WRITE MORE !

great story and can't wait for the next update

I like your story, well written and you know the characters so well. Although I wish it was femslash, I like any story about these two characters because they have a strong bond of some kind and the show has killed that between them. I like how you're making them patch things up, I didn't like what direction the characters were going and the "so-called" hate that Annie suddenly had for Joan. Can't wait to read more chapters, well done!

Great chp! The last sentence brings up a point that I think a lot of the viewers had forgotten.

I'm really liking the story and love how you've got both POVs! Hope to see a new chapter soon!

I liked this! I found myself frustrated with Annie, but their issues truly go beyond Russia and began way back with Annie being transferred to Lena, so their reconciliation would not be a simple sorry.

Oooh, love it! You really showed how hard it is for Joan to expose herself. I want to know Annie's reaction, so please update soon! :)

That was a really sweet statement from Joan. Looking forward to Annie's response, even if I have to wait until next year.

This chapter left me at a loss. What is Annie's response?
Why stop where you did? I hope you continue. I see so
much potential for the story. It would be a shame to not
complete it.

AM LOVIN THIS! CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER :D

The flashback was a great idea. I really liked reading Joan's perspective on that. Really good chapter!

"Once again, the role of a mother fits so preciously but it is outside her grasp."

This story is amazing, and I love that line especially. Please continue!

Definitely continue. This is such a well-written
emotionally charged story. Thank you for giving
some type of answer to the Israeli story that
changed Annie's direction in the CIA. I always
felt Lena was behind it. She wanted to start that
rumor of doubt in Annie's abilities and allegiance
to the CIA.
Too, I really feel Annie needs that maternal connection
that Joan can offer her since her sister's move and we never
see of hear of her mother in the show.

Yay I'm so glad you did the flashback bit :) Awesome chapter

I just read through all the three chapters and they're great, absolutely great! I like your spin on things, that Joan actually has deep feelings for Annie, motherly feelings. I mean, we've all wondered what really triggered Joan's turn to drugs again, I mean sure she might have been upset that Annie went behind her back, but this explains a lot of things and I like it. I usually don't read that many Arthur/Joan centered FanFic's but yours I really like.

I hope you'll update soon :).

/Moons