|Reviews for Lines of Communication|
| iamhere23 11/20/12 . chapter 1
| Slipstream77 11/20/12 . chapter 1
Heartbreaking and lovely. As someone whose last fic dealt with the same time period, I have a special fondness for this story and your take on it. I love your economy of words- you say so much with so little.
One of my favorite bits:
"For all the riot of color staining the sky behind Big Ben, it's New York's blocky skyline that boasts the meticulous care and attention to detail, the sunrise reflected perfectly in every window."
Of course Neal could render that skyline perfectly from memory, after looking at every day! Beautifully stated.
Thank you for sharing this piece-I really enjoyed it. Hope to see more from you soon.