What a well thought-out and executed story! I was very empressed by the suspense and surpirses that you built into it. I can't imagine that it was easy to keep everything straight!

However, I was looking through your list of stories, and I can't find the sequel! Is that because my computer is being dumb, or has it not been written yet? Please let me know!

One more thing; the only thing I would like to point out in your story is grammer. I am currently in a gruelling english class, so I'm a bit of a stickler for correct grammer. Your story is still easy to read and follow, but if you fixed up a bit of the grammer it might flow a little better.

Dang, that part with the dream was really intense. Such good description.

I know this might be a stretch but in the previews the person that Orla is trying to 'protect' is probably Galahad who I'm guessing has some relation to Ganondorf most likely his son which would give Galahad inheritance to the Triforce of Power. And as another weird twist Orla and Galahad will probably end up being together get married and have a kid that has the Triforce of Power, Wisdom, and Courage passed down to him or her. Many conflicts will of course happen between all of this.

-sigh- Although this is what I'm guessing, it probably isn't close to anything of the real story. And I also doubt you will ever read this review considering its been years since you finished Endeffera and you haven't even started the sequel. Ow well.

I like just got finished readin your trilogy. They have to be my fav Zelda fics thats not a retellin. I loved the way you introduce so many new charcters. its awesome. I also liked the name thing.

Great stories hope more will come *hint hint*

good luck

Are you going to post the next installment anytime soon, or what?

Cool Mortis is dead

Lol Orla came back. Fierce Deity! Forgot what I was gonna say...

She's not dead!...I have to read on to confim what I just said...

Will Kingy meet long thought dead wife?

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Aw one of the daughters are going to die.

This another of my favorite stories to read!
one of my very very very favorites to read! i can't wait for the next story!

Been a long time since I've read any of your stuff.
To tell ya the truth, this review is just to tag it so I can remember to read it later- I haven't actually started re-reading it yet. _
But fear not, I'll be back with a real review. Eventually. Probably after finals...

This was really good fiction, i read all of it an di mean it. It was Great!

i don't know how you do it but each one of your chapters are fantastic. I hope to see more great stories from you in the future.