Please continue writing, it is a great start for a Fabina story. Go Fabina, boo Jabian!

Hi! I'm new to FanFiction and I need some tips!

Great story. Really do hope you will continue.

I have come with advice to make this story FABULOUS! Okay, that's odd...

Anywho! You should try making your story have paragraphs, and you need a new one everytime somebody knew speaks. Like if Nina talks, and then Fabian, that's two paragraphs. Also, you need to watch your punctuation and capitalization. Without those things, stories tend not to flow correctly, confusing your reader. Description also makes chapters longer, and stories make more sense as well.

I shall follow, because I love Fabina so much, and I think this story could be good if it was just formatted correctly :)

Or even try a Beta Reader! They help very much! I am one, so if you ever need assistance, just PM me! :)