|Reviews for Fifty Shades of Baby Brain|
| sam5973 11/24/12 . chapter 8
I knew he wasn't cheating...it just couldn't be him! So who is living in Escala? I though Ryan, but no...so I'm thinking Sawyer, especially seeing Christian dismissed him that evening...hmmm
Great updates...reading on...post more soon!
Thanks - Samantha
| Carmelroads 11/24/12 . chapter 10
Awe is so happy for sawyer! This is a good story idea. Just enough drama without the actual cheating
| Lal 11/22/12 . chapter 3
More pls more! Let us know what is it! It'a killing me!
| Startoffwriter 11/24/12 . chapter 9
Love this ..when's the next out ...?:)
| Guest 11/22/12 . chapter 2
Next chapter PLEASE!
| Rhea 11/22/12 . chapter 3
i need to know if this is a cheating story you need to be honest and respect other people's feelings most of us have had enough Of them not very original. I am in no way criticising your writing but my heart can't take them anymore especially when Ana is in her final stages of pregnancy it's very disturbing as shows Christian as a low hearted sob and his bitch as a cold hearted us know if it is indeed a cheating story.
| greyfan 79 11/24/12 . chapter 9
Love this story go get your woman cg and give her a telling off
| Lizzy 11/22/12 . chapter 3
Interesting. Is Ana dreaming this?
| Ljs117 11/24/12 . chapter 9
I thin I now where this is going. Good idea but still sad.
| Ljs117 11/24/12 . chapter 7
I am a mascocist. Why am I reading this? It's good so far!
| Jasmine Garden 11/24/12 . chapter 9
How difficult it is to read how proud Christian is in the steps he's made to gain confidence with his impending Fatherhood. He devotedly gives all credit to Ana. Christian's profession of love for his wife is a joy to read!
While I expected Christian to go all 50, and he did initially, when he realized his wife had left him again, I felt Christian's overwhelming sadness and pain. When Chistian says, "why has she left me...' and "starts to feel the dread that washed over me a year ago... and I want to just sink... no not again... she wouldnt, couldnt do this to me...our baby," I can see his pale as death face and feel his terror. I now have such compassion for him, if this is terrible misunderstanding it appears to be. One minute Christian is preoccupied with loving, adoring, and happy thoughts of his wife and the impending birth of his son, and the next minute, he's lost it all. The devastation is pulsating, frightening, and makes one's blood run cold.
This chapter is poignant, moving, and TRAGIC. I don't know what to expect when Christian meets up with Kate. I'm not quite sure that he will go all 50 as he's hit rock bottom. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, UPDATE SOON! WHAT AN AMAZING STORY!
THANK YOU FOR WORKING SO HARD & SURPRISING ME WITH THIS CHAPTER LATE AT NIGHT!
| Guest 11/22/12 . chapter 3
| viola.walsh.73 11/24/12 . chapter 9
Would it have to hard not to leave us hanging lol . Love the story . You have me on the edge of my seat . Update soon . Laters
| blondegirl3 11/24/12 . chapter 9
You go Christian! And when you find Ana after you are relieved she is safe, you should be pissed she did not talk to you let alone trust you! Ugh'
| kathd16 11/24/12 . chapter 9
Yeah finally! Can't wait to see what happens next