|Reviews for Wisp Futuretake|
| RitaB 11/21/12 . chapter 1
This is beautiful. And, above all, realistic. With all the support she's had, Wisp has made such progress but there will always be things that she will have difficulties with or won't be able to do. But she was so strong and their relationship was lovely, it was a pleasure to read. Thanks.
| dazzled2 11/21/12 . chapter 1
Your account of future Bella and Edward's relationship in the future is just beautiful and rings true - so good!
| Jaxolelady 11/21/12 . chapter 1
I'm not opposed to them being together romantically, I think that eventually it will happen...
I think this is a beautiful possible future take on Wisp, I only have one problem here
the lack of child.
not the fact that they made the decision to not have a child, but the reason behind it. Children are centering, grounding, life changing little people, for these reasons alone I think that a child would solidify and ground Bella and Edward.
but it's your story...go with what you know :)
| Lilydukes 11/21/12 . chapter 1
THIS WAS PERFECT! this has to be a real futuretake! You wrote it really well - describing realistically how wisp could be in the future.
Thank you so much - you made my day with this!
| miss followill 11/21/12 . chapter 1
oh my god this was so unexpected and beautiful and precious... I cant even describe my feelings right now! I was on the group that had doubts on them having a romantic relationship, but reading this... It just makes perfect sense because theyre not just a couple, she is not even his girlfriend really, she's just HIS. Their closeness and bond is beyond every definition and of course fits them amazingly well and while reading this I realised that it doesnt even make sense for edward to have anyone else because she is his destiny, beyond all theyre just meant to be 3 I hope this futuretake is real because i love it so much.
ps.: bella's sperm donor is the shittiest piece of shit ever and it made me angry that his ass isnt on jail. But i guess having the doctor and the pet obsessed is good enough.
| RobstenLover93 11/21/12 . chapter 1
I loved them together! Great futuretake ever!
| tbens 11/21/12 . chapter 1
definitely definitely definitely need an edward/bella together romantically, emotionally, physically etc ... sorry to say but i'm obsessed with their pairing no matter what they endure to get there ... thats just me but i cant help it ... prob coz so much shit in my life i need them together
ur a brilliant writer and am amazed at ur talent
thanks for sharing
| pinktomate 11/21/12 . chapter 1
I love it! Thanks for this futuretake!
| GreenEyedLove06 11/21/12 . chapter 1
Omg absolutely loved this!
| stormy315 11/21/12 . chapter 1
amazing! i really hope that wisp will accomplish as much as you described in this futuretake...
| gemma smells like apple cake 11/21/12 . chapter 1
For once I'm not like yay smit for the sack of smut
Bella's getting to have fun healthy sexy time which woul prob'a go a long way in differentiating between things, I don't know...
Yay wisp more please but I the normal wisp fic
| sherryola 11/21/12 . chapter 1
Oh this was lovely. Seeing this possible future for wisp. I think it felt very real and possible. She's made such progress, but she has things she'll never be able to do or to handle. That's realistic to me. Loved seeing her experience Disneyland. I felt so proud of her trying all the different things. I laughed at her love of all food, just because it's soemthing she had carried through from her early days int he story. I love how Edward is with her, how aware of every little nuance and feeling. I cried when she saw her sperm donor. I hate to call him her father. i was raised by my father since my mother didn't want to raise a disabled child, and that thing that sent her into that life of hell is no father! But she was so damn strong, and I wanted to cheer for her. Good Wisp! Honestly, this is the way I'd love to see her future go. Thanks for this.
| camianbu88 11/21/12 . chapter 1
awwww, this would be such a perfect ending to all of Wisp's suffering, including the face off with her sperm donor (no one that sick can ever be someones father). I admit I was a little put off when the "lemon" started, but it's really beautiful to think that Wisp could have the possibility of that kind of relationship with Edward...either way, I'll continue to read this wonderful story
| ohtobeyoung 11/21/12 . chapter 1
Loved this. Hope this works into the actual story.
| debslmac 11/21/12 . chapter 1