oh, yeah. that's is one hot car, and sure, hook tha hottie up with lex. i am liking this. she can have her pic of any man ('cept pete cuz that would be gross) that she wants. plezze finish this, i would love to read more. the formating is perfect know, please write more. i will review every chapter if you write them, please.

this is not crap. i like it a lot. you never see main black characters 'cuz everyone who writes is, i guess, white. nothing wrong with that, i just wanna see more representin' and i like your fic a lot. this is good and i like thalia, she sounds hot. it is a shame she is pete's cousin, but can she at least get something on with clark. they seem to like each other. please, learn a different way to format.

once again it is good and the formatting is a little better. you have to work harder on time, though. like your paragraphs switch from this event to the next without and forewarning or anything. and i really don't undertand the last few sentences. still, can't wait for the next.

'nother good chap, but man the formatting sucks. i hate reading stories like this, but it is worth it if it has pete.

man this starts out good, but the way it's formatted sucks big time. can't wait to read more. i know this is an old story of yours, but i am just getting into the fandom and yours is the first i have found.

I luv it... it's totally getting interesting...

Good start:)

The lack of format makes it reeeeally difficult to read. I don't know if your computer went wacky, but you need paragraphs and dialogue structure. Keep up the good work:)