This was a nice story. It captured the new future Chinook and Shade would have as brothers, despite rivalry in the past. They aren't exactly sobbing over each others shoulder's (wing's?) with emotion or happiness. They're acting like two brothers would.

Please please write more SOON i love it

that is a really good story. you r good at writing silver. if i had a nickle for every time i thaught that i would be the richest guy on earth!