My god man/woman what have you done to this story you started off with a great premise, that being Xanders multiple past possessions mixing with Asgard grade magic to have unforeseen effects on everybody and every thing in the area. (Even then you could have used a better beta-reader to catch the clunky paragraphs, spelling mistakes, run-on sentences and many other sins of writing)
But then you went of into thin air with your plot, building it out of match-sticks and trying to bend what little canon remained to fit.
I'm sorry for ranting, my cousin works as an editor and I picked up her attitude at a young age.
Still this tale has promise.
NB: I would be pleased to beta but I cannot without posting tales I'm not happy with.

The sense of flow thus far is confusing as hell. I'm guessing this is a sequel or something, because I am utterly lost as to what is going on here.

Not as much action as I might of hoped for, but I'm enjoying the character interaction you are creating as they get to know eachother better. I'm looking forward to your next installment.

So far this is actually building up in a very interesting manner. Is this posted in any other site?

I wonder what will happen when Hawkeye, Xander and Thor catch up with the Shaman. The spear’s reaction to Dawn was interesting. Hopefully Tony can figure out what happened to his AIs. Looking forward to seeing more soon.

Love this story and can't wait to read more

Good story.

Fantastic work, the fight scene was better then the movie !

In the words of the Fluffy One, Damn.

Get Buffy, Willow, and the rest of the gang together. It's gonna be a blast.