This an awesome story but what is with all of the deaths. I mean i'm freaking out, Seriously Kalona died he was my fav. :( (tear) I may not like that death but you write amazing stories keep updating this story I want to see how it ends. see Ya!

I am so hating you right now. Why did you kill everybody? I thought Sgiach and her Warriors were coming? What happened to Darius? Zoey, Stark, & Aphrodite died before they could fight. And WHY DID YOU KILL KALONA?!

Wow, there is no way I would have read this far if I would have known it would end like this. This is the worst story I have ever read I hope the real book doesn't end this terible. What crap!

Ummmm...WHAT?! No. I refuse! NO! THEY ARE NOT DEAD! NO NO NO. No. Hello? Is Casey there? Yes? I'd like to speak to her please! Hello, Casey? I'M FREAKING OUT OVER HERE! THEY. CANNOT. DIE. No. STAHHHHHP. Okay, first, since we are on the topic of DEAD, Kalona's death (NOOOO!) was just so beautiful! I just got chills! SOOO GOOD! Very, very sad, but good. I'm upset right now. Like majorly upset. CAUSE YOU WENT AND KILLED OFF EVERYONE! WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?! No. Stop. Zoey. DEAD. Stark and Aurox? DEAD. Aphrodite and Kalona and Theseus and Travis and Kramisha and Jordan and Johnny B and Sophie? DEAD DEAD DEAD. And, as an added bonus, DEAD. HELLO? AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAND THEN YOU GO AND KILL OFF MY TWO FAVORITE CHARACTERS! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?! Obviously, you're trying to drive me INSANE! THEY CANNOT DIE! Please! Don't let them die! *cue puppy eyes* pleeeeeaaaaase! They can't all just die...*tears* don't let them all be dead...
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P.S: Not feeling too smiley

OMG! That was soooo cruel. I can't believe that Neferet is the only one to live. So, I wonder if good is truly over. Noooooooooooo! Stark died! *Tearing Up* :( This is so messed up. I think they should at least live happily ever after in the Otherworld.

Amazing chapter! Oh my goddess... I wonder what's going to happen. it's not like it can get much worse... and I really hope that the last few chapters aren't filled with everyone in the otherworld and stuff... that would pain me greatly. I suppose it would be happy... for them... but that was so dramatic!
The only problem I have is that the sun was out... wouldn't the red fledglings burn to crisps?
If you don't update soon, I'll hunt you down. I'm serious. :)
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I just read- OH GOD, WHAT DID I READ!? Please tell me Lenobia isn't really dead! Her and Travis..marriage...I...OH GOD.

Too much sadness and death ... :( but I love it!

Noooooo! You've let so many die. I'm desperately hoping this is similar to Breaking Dawn pt. 2. This can't be happening.

Awwwww that's so sad... Leobanna dies... Nooo she was my fav professor!

No. Stop. No. I can't. What? No. No. NOOOOOOO! LENOBIA CANNOT DIE! DUDE! SERIOUSLY! NO! NO! NO! NOOOOOOOOOOO! STOP! This is not okay. Not. Okay. No. AGHHHHHH! AMAZING CHAPTER! I like how they could see how Neferet was good again, but I AM NOT OKAY WITH LENOBIA BEING DEAD. Just. No. Please use your magic writing skills to bring her back. PLEASE! Okay, still an awesome chapter, but I have to say something: If you kill off Rephaim, or even Nisroc, or Stevie Rae, I'm gonna bawl so hard and possibly throw my computer across the room. I don't want to get a new computer. So, please. Your story, and you can do what you want with it, but I'm gonna cry. I'm gonna cry over Lenobia once I get over the denial. Anyway, FANTASTIC CHAPTER (I love/hate the battle so far because YOU KILLED LENOBIA!), but pretty, pretty please update soon! That would be super awesome.
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Amazing chapter! That's so sad... I hope that the poem means something different than it says... but it seems so obvious that it'll be right... that made no sense. Anyway, it would have been more depressing if Travis/Lenobia was shown more throughout the series. I just hope he dies as well so they can be together.
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx

Not at first unless Stark or Aurox explain or Neferet explain...

Loved it! This fanfic is just as good as the original series.

Omg loved it! Eeeeep! I can't wait for the next chapter! I don't know if I think that they'll believe she changed, but I kinda hope they do. AMAZING job; please update soon!
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