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Tigger-69 2008-02-27 ch 3,	abuseA fun and differnet story, I look forward to seeing how things pan out for all the Girls involved. This is a very interesting cross over of the various anime, very well discribed while leaving enough for my imagination to take it further and still come back for more. Please continue
Dumbledork 2007-03-20 ch 3,	abuseTis is quite a fun story. I hope you'll get your muse back and continue writing it one day.
a 2006-10-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseHe might have stopped writing all together. Stuff happens ya know?
Trscroggs 2006-05-16 ch 3,	abuseI know this story isn't likely to be continued. Seeing as how its had no changes in the last three years, but I wish it would be. I've always enjoyed this particualr type of story, even if you make fun of several Ranma-ficiton overused story elements (I KNOW there is one word taht means that, I just can't spell it.) of course screwed your formating to hell, but that's so typical you pratcialy have to write for to get it right, and even then it could go wrong. I really do like the "Ranma related to everything at once" joke though.
Zero-Vision 2006-02-19 ch 3,	abuseis this story still being continued?
Innortal 2005-08-17 ch 3,	abuseGreat job. This story was entertaining, as well as drew me in. I look forward to hoping that you continue it as well as your other Ranma/Nabiki stories. Innortal
Atilla 2005-08-10 ch 3, anon.	abuseIt has potential with an interesting plot staying in a bar. Though the vague references to bringing in unsespecting drunk girls are a little heavy.
mdizzle 2005-02-19 ch 1,	abuseslasher!!
Sebastian Foxcraft 2004-10-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseGood writer, let's just hope he continues some of the threads when he comes back.
Lanara Bolina 2004-03-26 ch 3,	abusevery good story. i hope you update soon. and why does ranma have green hair?
darkwoofe 2003-09-09 ch 3,	abuseI enjoyed reading this. I really hope you haven't given up on it. darkwoofe
dogbertcarroll 2003-07-26 ch 3,	abuseThe formatting is a bit cramped but I like the story. It's been a year since it was updated so I guess it's just another dead fic now.
dogbertcarroll 2003-07-26 ch 2,	abuseHm. That really does suit Akane.
dogbertcarroll 2003-07-26 ch 1,	abuseI like it. Ranma stressed enough to really need a break and Nabiki helping out. The Tenchi crew should fit in well.
Sunder the Gold 2003-01-30 ch 2, anon.	abuseAhem, as I was saying. In Chapter 3, you tell us that 'The poor woman didn't know what she was dealing with.' Which 'poor woman'? Ayeka, who doesn't smell a rat past the booze, or the woman, who doesn't know she's dealing with an alien imperial princess capable of personally reducing her to ash? The answer would really set us up for what we are to expect - that the scheming women end up succeeding in their nefarious plans against our beloved heroes/heroines or that the villans are caught off guard by two individuals who are far more powerful than they appear. I personally prefer the latter. All those rape fics seem like the authors' pleas to be shot, or perhaps are attempts to infect others with their negativity rather than producing something for the enjoyment and betterment of their readers. They leave a bad taste in my mouth. Besides, you have claimed that this is for humor, and the second scenario seems pretty funny to me. Still, by the title and the current content, I would assume that Ranma and Ayeka both get 'Laid', and with each other to boot. Nabiki said she woldn't be surprised if "Ranma came back pregnant with an alien princESS's child." As odd as that is supposed to be, I don't think it would be too big a shock if that's what actually happens. I just don't want to imagine how it would be possible.

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