I like the ending! Not extremely sappy, like most Peggy pining for Steve stories tend to be, but yet it still makes you sad. Well done
-Darke

There are really good descriptive bits in this. I like the premise of the story but I was unsure of what you were trying to show me about Peggy.

Anyway, I hope you write more.

You should not get nervous about posting this, because is really good! Great story.